Reviews for The Wizard’s Tale: A Continuation
||2012.03.25 - 12:13AM
||3: Chapter 3: Meet Obadiah Slope
|I like it so far but it could use some brit-picking. British only use the word 'ma'am' to address royalty. Snape would have called his new companion 'madam'.|
Author's Response: Alas, I'm sure there are many errors of that sort. This was one of the first things I wrote, long ago, when I'd barely heard of betas, let alone brit-pickers. I'm glad you like it anyway, and thanks for much for commenting!
||2009.02.21 - 08:32PM
|I loved this story I wish the book ended like this. You are a great writer !|
Author's Response: Thank you for the very kind words! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
||2008.07.15 - 03:36PM
|I just love this story - it has a bit of everything! I so like your Severus, you make him really believable. It is really well crafted and imaginative writing. I'm afraid I couldn't stop reading it! Well done! More please!! |
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad it has held up to time. Almost four years - yikes!
||2007.08.26 - 02:20AM
|Overall, excellent, though I don't recall specific mention of Lucius as a pike adornment.
A very human characterization of Severus, certainly without making him into something sappy. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! This was written so long ago, and has been soooo canon shafted.... Ah, well, it was fun, and how I saw Snape at the time. (I still rather like this version over JKR's, but don't tell anyone!)
||2007.08.26 - 01:45AM
||47: Chapter 46: Debriefing
|Gutting him and putting his head on a pike - I get visions of Vir Cotto, but with Mr. Morden's practicality, given Severus's lack of Vir's less dangerous characteristics.
Now... does Severus have a place to display said head as a warning?|
Author's Response: I think he'd put it somewhere rather public, don't you? Outside Malfoy Manor, perhaps?
||2007.08.26 - 12:40AM
||32: Chapter 31: For Family
|Disturbingly realistic. Well done, particularly with the interactions between Nymphadora, Lillith, and Severus.|
Author's Response: Thank you! I love the three of them; they are such fun to write together - even the hard parts.
||2006.10.06 - 10:39PM
|The best so far.|
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it. :-)
||2006.10.06 - 01:34PM
||38: Chapter 37: Promise Kept
|I needed a smoke after that. Wonderful writng.|
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! Thanks for commenting.
||2006.08.02 - 07:02PM
||4: Chapter 4: Old Friends, Old Enemies
|"... nor do I want spend my life with a man who can sour the milk on my cereal with his ‘Good Morning.’”
:-)))))) Just GREAT!|
Author's Response: Thanks! Tonks has a pretty clear idea of what she wants, and it isn't just sex. We should all be so level-headed. :)
||2006.08.02 - 01:48PM
||1: Chapter 1: A Change of Plan
|I read "A Wizard's Tale" and loved it. So I immediately went on with this one - and again I love it. Must be you. ;-) And the reading your "review conversations" is an extra treat! ;-)|
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. "Conversations" with reviewers are the best part for me. I just wish I had realized I could respond sooner! *was never good with the fine print*
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