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Reviews for Snape In Love

Sniv 2005.01.12 - 08:51AM 3: Chapters 9 to 12 Signed
Chap9.: No no he cant die! NO! Chap10.: *sniff* This is soo moving! Chap11: God bless Harry Potter! Yes he is back! And what a lovely ending of these chapters! He loves her!!! -and most of all he said it!

Sniv 2005.01.11 - 05:54PM 2: Chapters 5 to 8 Signed
Snape what is going on?! *pokes him hard* She does not deserve that! | Malfoy is up to something but what Im not sure... And Snape is off again hmm I wonder what he is doing. I feel so much her that Im almost sobbing - its very well writen because I can feel her pain soo much that its like its real! Great! | *breathless* He DID love her! Yes! And what is going on - if he dies Im gonna die too! This story is fantastic! OMG and he gave her the pensieve! | Ah and the ending! My heart is running wild here! Amazing story so far! You have my deepest respect!

Sniv 2005.01.11 - 05:16PM 1: Chapters 1 to 4 Signed
Chap 1.: Ah I love the way you write! And I really like this character of yours! I think that I would have reacted almost like her! Looks very promising! I also like that this is in 1st person which is something I dont find often, which makes this a nice encounter especially because you are good at it! | Chap 2. Very good! Sirius and Remus are there - thatll be interesting and I like that she had an accident in order to get her talking (and maybe more) to Snape! | Chap3.: Leaves me speechless! I really like that we see this in 1st person because it kinda makes it even more interesting! And Snape is showing signs of...I dunno but he is not that bad in the end, maybe after talking to her he finds out that she is not that bad - and was he the one to suggest the co-operation? lol | Chap 4.: *sobs* No what happened?! Snape what are you thinking?!?!

Darklit 2005.01.01 - 06:31AM 1: Chapters 1 to 4 Signed
Marillion! As soon as I saw the first line of that song, I was hooked! I'm loving this story so far! (On the Marbles tour this year, h came on stage looking surprisingly snape-like - it was great!) - Darklit

Author's Response: Hah! my first Marillion fan reviewer! I saw them this last tour in London, they were great...and h does have great hair, doesn't he? Surprising I have never had the hots for him, really! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story, and try Spock's Beard if you like Marillion, they're great! ;-))

Vocalion 2004.11.28 - 03:28PM 1: Chapters 1 to 4 Anonymous
I've heard of this story, and seen it recommended on various threads, but this is the first time I've actually stumbled across it to have a read. It's hard to remember everything I want to say, with four chapters together like this, but it's very enjoyable and you have some very fresh descriptions of Snape. The more I read, the less I seem to retain, and for some reason, all I can remember right now is "Uncle Joe's Mint Balls". An odd thing to mention, but it made me laugh. Very nicely written.

EllieK 2004.10.06 - 10:58PM 1: Chapters 1 to 4 Signed
This was the very first SS/OFC story that I ever read. You got me hooked, you naughty girl!

Author's Response: Glad to be of service! ;-))

mori 2004.09.23 - 04:41PM 3: Chapters 9 to 12 Anonymous
“Lupin!” Severus called after us in a dangerous tone, “Is there something I should know?” OMG-What a Duran duran flash-back I just had.

Author's Response: AARRGGHHH!!! ;-)

mori 2004.09.23 - 03:23PM 1: Chapters 1 to 4 Anonymous
"He was by far my superior intellectually and yet he appeared to value, even respect, my opinions and made me feel that he was perhaps learning as much from me as I was from him. " This, however, is a terrrible sentiment to convey to an audience of well-read women who appreciates fanfiction of your quality. How very Mary-Sue-ish in her worship of his superior intellect! What a negative stereotype! Ella is obviously intelligent. Why should Snape be superior in intellect to her? Just delete the sentence and your paragraph really loses noting but a sentence that leaves a bad taste in the mouth.

Author's Response: You know, I never really thought about it that way; but reading it here, I'm surprised that I wrote it. Hmm. All I can say in my defence is that she views him through rose-coloured glasses throughout this story and he's disarmed her somewhat. She does vacillate between being a strong independent person and a bit of a ditz. Let's put it down to her psychological problems, LOL! Thanks for the crit, though. I appreciate it.

Mori 2004.09.22 - 09:31PM 1: Chapters 1 to 4 Anonymous
As soon as the Frownisecond sentance: "he resembled some strange black prism", I knew this was gonna be a good read.

LariLee 2004.08.09 - 03:27PM 19: Chapters 57 and Epilogue Anonymous
Excellent story and lots of steamy scenes (can't have too much Severus, now can we? At least I can't). Thanks! ~Lisa

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