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Reviews for Making Ends Meet

Ali 2005.03.10 - 02:50PM 29: The Watermouths Anonymous
Great story!! Please write more chapters!!!

Author's Response: :-D Thank you! More chapters are on the way...but work is never-ending! I swear I'm going to collapse soon! Thanks for the review, Ali! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!

HPFan 2005.03.04 - 09:38PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Great!! i didnt like Rosie in the last chapter but now i know her reasons. Keep writing!!! :)

Author's Response: Oh dear, lots of people seem to have been irritated by Rosie in the last chapter, which wasn't entirely intentional! Oops! Seems Rosie had a bit of an off day... Maybe I've been inadvertently channelling my own 'off-day-ness'! Thanks, HPFan!

Grainne 2005.03.02 - 11:00PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Make that, "various versions." I was called away to supper before I could proof-read (can't keep the chef waiting). I wish you a fantabulous rest-of-week and weekend.

Author's Response: Oh, I don't know, I quite liked "various verisons"! ;-D Have a greak week, too!

Grainne 2005.03.02 - 08:14PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Obadiah, I am so pleased you are well again and so sorry to hear you've been having a shite week or two. Some of my favourite lines/phrases from this: *his hair dripping over his features* "Getting the students to pickle animals in detention is one of my favourite punishments"*His mouth followed her though and refused to leave her alone* [big smiles all around]. As for your "reviewer," I would like to say this--I admit that when I first began reading this story, your Snape was not the canon Snape that I was familiar with . However, canon Snape, as far as we know, has absolutely no love life...so a good 9.999% of the fics on this site are technically OOC. And as I read on, I found Rosie so damn infectious, and your Snape to be consistent within the characterization that you had created, so I couldn't help but like this story. No, I would never dream of calling Severus anything other than "Severus," but Rosie is the type who would and does...the point being that if we only read what we, in our own minds, are comfortable with, we are missing out on a lot. Sorry for the ramble-on, and I hope this isn't too much honesty, but I wanted to tell you what I thought and put in a vote for the various verisons of Snape that we all indulge in...a toast to you, your Snape and one Miss Rosie Watermouth!

Author's Response: Cheers, Grainne. Glad you liked the "dripping hair" bit, I was pleased when that flowed from my fingertips and onto the computer screen. Don't worry, I appreciate honesty, to a fair degree, and I had gathered that you weren't entirely convinced of my Snape to begin with. In some repects, I do agree that Snape isn't the...likeliest Snape ever written, but I put that down to inexperience on my part. This is my first fic after all, and as the story continues, I do feel that Snape has morphed into more-or-less what I hoped to write. And, no, Snape would never be called Sev - by anyone but Rosie - and that is a deliberate choice by me. I think the very fact he accepts it shows his affection for her. Anyway, thanks a lot ... Rosie and Severus appreciate the toast - as does Obadiah!

aramintasnape 2005.03.02 - 04:43PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Yay, they made up, they made up! I'm glad something went right for them at last and they didn't end up arguing during the visit to her parents! And the part with the phone was great!

As for the flamer, well that is horrible! I had that on another site once too (I have a sneaking suspicion it's probably the same site!) I just deleted it, to be quite honest! Your Snape is wonderful and you don't need to change anything about your story! And I bet this person didn't leave a 'signed' review. Just tell yourself they have probably never had the guts to post anything of their own (except nasty reviews of course!) and are probably just jealous! I should be careful, they'll be after me next... *sending big hugs*

Author's Response: :-D Finally Severus and Rosie are learning the power of discussion. They amazed me that they didn't want to argue at Rosie's parent's house! And, yes, the flamer...you're quite right, not a signed review...and I, also, have a sneaking suspicion that it was the same sight! ;-D Flamers seem to hang around the bowels of that place... Anyway, thanks for the vote of confidence, and big hugs back! Cheers, araminta!


LariLee 2005.03.02 - 12:52PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
(((Obadiah Slope))) There is a big cyber hug for you, honey! Is it a purely American saying that "mean people suck"? I'm so glad Severus likes Rosie's family and is learning why she has commitment-phobia. I hope his next proposal is smoother and accepted! Poor boy has been having trouble with proposals lately. :-)

Let me know what site that mean person was on, and I'll take a cane to him! Or her!

~Lisa

Author's Response: Very much appreciated, Lisa! No, I don't think it's purely American...mean people do suck... Ah, yes, Severus' proposals...I have to catch up with your story soon! Too much work!! I think I'm going to collapse! And that reviewer... fanfiction.net is where he/she hangs out! Cheers, Lisa!


Melpomene Erato 2005.03.02 - 12:50PM 29: The Watermouths Anonymous
Wow! Good thing things got better between them, or I would have been forced to comit an act of desperation.

One tiny thing: if she could conjure a mobil phone (already connected to a working system, etc.) why did she need the regular phone to be installed by a technician? Couldn't she conjure that also?

Author's Response: Thank you, Melopmene! Ah, now, who said that the shoe-mobile actually worked?! Rosie's mum phoned before we found out. (Okay, I made that up, but I'm satisfied with that reasoning! Thanks for bringing it up...I'd never have noticed!) Oh, and, btw, well done on your now completed fic...I know you didn't post the epilogue, but it worked well as it was, so a final 'well done'!

Sniv 2005.03.02 - 12:50PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Blah forgot to say: WTF who could possibly say that your Snape is ooc - what is that persons problem??? *glares* Their loss! *hugs* There there! Please just try and forgot it some people are just you know...blah

Author's Response: Lol! Thank you very much! Snape was pretty offended himself, and threatened to go after the reviewer, but then I was reminded by 'anonymous_eccentric' that there was no textual evidence for this happening. (It's so nice to get a couple of digs in...) People are blah indeed, and it makes those of you who aren't all the more wonderful! Thank you, Sniv!

Sniv 2005.03.02 - 12:45PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Hehe lovely ending. And Im glad to see that the in-laws wasnt such a big thing after all for Snape! Glad to see an update! :) Great chapter!

Author's Response: :-D Thank you, Sniv!

EllieK 2005.03.02 - 12:24PM 29: The Watermouths Signed
Snape meets the folks! That was fun. I am amazed that he enjoyed himself, but since her mother is so much like her, it is really no wonder. Poor Rosie! Bad decisions about men are hard to get over. However, she had better say yes to Sevvie soon, or I may just steal him from her ;) Now, hurry and write the next chapter!

Author's Response: ;-D Oh, don't call him Sevvie, my reviewer'll be on to you like a shot! Lol. It was hard to write the Snape/parents scene - it started in my mind as an absolute disaster, but Severus and Rosie argued with me, telling me that they couldn't take another set of parents loathing them! Glad you liked the chappie! Thanks, EllieK!

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