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Reviews for Indebted to a Hufflepuff

EllieK 2004.11.10 - 03:01PM 30: Evolution Signed
Brutal. I always knew Draco was an evil little git! I think his possession is fitting. What will Snape do when he finds her? Yikes!

Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't make Draco too evil in this story because the books usually describe how very nasty he is. He never expected to have to give up his life for Voldemort. Bet Narcissa isn't too thrilled about this.

Well, Voldemort will bring Snape to see if it provokes him into "telling behavior". Snape will have to proceed with caution.

Vocalion 2004.11.10 - 11:52AM 30: Evolution Anonymous
Dark, but not too dark to read. I can't imagine that many readers would decide to skip this chapter. So that's what goes on with the Death Eaters! And now I know what they keep the snake around for.

Author's Response: I've always wondered exactly what part of Nagini's anatomy has to be "milked" for Voldemort. (shiver)

If Voldemort keeps up treating his Death Eaters like this, pretty soon the snake will be his only follower.

LariLee 2004.11.10 - 10:31AM 30: Evolution Signed
You know, I don't know who to feel sorriest for here... her or Bellatrix. After all, Snape will rescue her, but Bellatrix is stuck (psychopathic killer or not). And how does Narcissa feel about her golden boy being sacrificed to house a Half-Blood dictator? WOMEN OF THE WIZARDING WORLD UNITE! It's time for the witches to take control! And Snape needs to hurry! Powerful chapter. I'm sure it must have been difficult to write as parts were difficult to read. ~Lisa

Author's Response: Well, Bellatrix was prepared to torture a child to death, so... I'm not feeling TOO bad about her.

Narcissa (and Draco) had NO IDEA this was going to happen. Malfoy had given up on his prospects for a job and decided to back the other horse, not knowing the other horse was going to ride HIM instead of the other way around.

Yeah, I get annoyed at how very Victorian HP's world is.

As horrible as this sounds, the harsh content did not come from my imagination. I attended a talk given by the mother of a torture victim. As an extremelt rare thing, the mother was allowed to see her son, who died a little while later. The description was not identical, of course (I would never trivialize something like that!), but it gave me a general idea of what goes on in those sick, twisted places.

Floris 2004.11.09 - 01:41AM 29: Spark of Change Anonymous
Well done as always!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm about two thirds done with the next chapter, but it really has me struggling. It's supposed to be very dark, but not so dark that it sends all the readers screaming.

Vocalion 2004.11.08 - 01:10PM 29: Spark of Change Anonymous
You handle character dialogue beautifully. I will check back for updates.

Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for all the great reviews! I'm working on the next chapter now.

Vocalion 2004.11.08 - 12:39PM 28: Confrontation Anonymous
Good dialogue in this chapter, and the last sentence was especially apt. You're very good at summing things up using few words.

Author's Response: Isn't it just heart breaking when you have this colossal fight with your partner over some thing (or person) and that thing (or person) remain totally unfazed?

Vocalion 2004.11.08 - 12:15PM 27: Narcissa's Cocktail Party Anonymous
This was a very well-written chapter that conveyed much. Your use of language painted a very vivid picture: Narcissa kissed the air near Olivia Mowbray's ear --so much is inferred by the reader in that one short phrase. Good choice of character names, too. I can see the thought that you put in to your work, and I notice these things.

Author's Response: You, know, the scary part is that I've actually MET women who talk like that. I'm so glad you're enjoying this and doubly so to see your reviews!

Vocalion 2004.11.07 - 07:47PM 26: Mistaken Impressions Anonymous
Excellent chapter, and you're doing a good job of keeping Snape unpredictable, which I like.

Author's Response: I think one of the reasons she resists opalliom is because he is unpredictable and she's simply afraid to give up her heart to him.

Vocalion 2004.11.07 - 06:22PM 25: The Feast Anonymous
Great scene. The strip cooking, the tub, the flowers. Very inventive.

Author's Response: Without going into too much detail, let me just say that the whole "Polynesian mute lady" works *very* well in real life.

Vocalion 2004.11.07 - 05:59PM 24: The Tower of London Anonymous
Now that's what I call foreplay! What a creative imagination you have. It took me a while to catch on to what was happening. I thought those porcelein people were going to hurt her. I am easily frightened.

Author's Response: My intention was to frighten the reader because *she* was frightened. Sometimes a little fear can go a long way in foreplay. Incidentally, some other readers were deeply disturbed by it and did not like it at all. I'm glad you did.

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