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Reviews for Indebted to a Hufflepuff

EllieK 2004.10.15 - 06:57PM 19: Frailty, thy name is... Anonymous
I want to rech out and slap him! What an ass!!! What a bloody typical male!!!

Author's Response: I'm indignant too. She's supposed to sit around and thank her lucky stars when he comes around to see her... Well, he'll find that she's made of sterner stuff!

EllieK 2004.10.15 - 09:57AM 9: I Am Inside You Now Signed
Damn!

Author's Response: I hope that was a "Damn that was hot" and not "Damn, the story really took a dive here" ;)

EllieK 2004.10.15 - 04:25AM 6: An Adult Should Know Better Signed
I always did hat that little prick Draco!

Author's Response: Well, she is still stung from his Umbridge sqaud alliance the year before.

Anyway, she has bigger fish to fry!

EllieK 2004.10.15 - 04:16AM 4: Therapy Signed
That was classic!

Author's Response: It was hard to figure out how Snape would act after the treatment. I'm glad you approve!

EllieK 2004.10.15 - 04:12AM 3: The Dark Mark Yields to Certain Forces Signed
AAAHHH!!! This is soooo good!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! It's really contrived, but ... HEY!.... it's just an excuse for lemons ;)

LariLee 2004.10.14 - 05:13AM 25: The Feast Anonymous
Not a review, just a note that I love everything you've written. I sincerely love your Snape. :-D ~Lisa

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means so much to me!

June 2004.10.13 - 07:02PM 25: The Feast Anonymous
Ch 25 - SHRIEK!!! He goes to all this trouble to get her to opalliom again and then she STOPS it!!! Next time, he should just tell her to "let it happen". Groan.... BTW, thanks for the chapter; after the last chapter (scary porcelain dolls with tiny dagger), this was VERY nice. Umm, did she get to eat any dinner, or just him?

Author's Response: Good point! I guess she managed a few bites in between his. He doesn't know that she's holding back... though I imagine he'll figure it out during some future lemon ;)
Thanks for the review!

Isobel L 2004.09.29 - 04:14PM 24: The Tower of London Anonymous
Wow - that was so imaginative. You created a very seductive scene, heightened by the somewhat sinister porcelain dolls with unknown intentions. Your Snape certainly is master of his game. I love his final comments - it always comes down to the stomach! lol.

Author's Response: Thanks! I worked very hard on those to ty to give them a novel touch.

June W 2004.09.25 - 02:05AM 23: Far Away Lands Anonymous
(2nd try at leaving a review for this chapter) I'm dense... why is it an insult to Mrs Hemmings to tell her to take off the rest of the weekend? Does Mrs Hemmings know she likes Severus? Nice touch, for Severus to Stupefy her before apparating her back home. We wouldn't want him to be too mushy...heh-heh...

Author's Response: She's insulted because she made it sound as if she had pushed to work on the weekend, when in fact it was her own initiative... and she herself had done nothing, since she was waiting for Snape. Mrs. Hemmings has figured it out by now.

Thanks for the reviews!


Author's Response: About Mrs. Hemmings: also she's earned a fair amount of autonomy, and she's bothered that she tried to regulate when she shows up to work or not... it's a kind of "You're love sick, and you're acting like a fool. Don't mess with me." kind of thing.

June W 2004.09.25 - 02:02AM 24: The Tower of London Anonymous
Ch 24 - porcelain dolls with tiny dagger... eeks! Reminds me too much of a scary Twilight Zone episode that still gives me the creepies. The doll "kneed her" should probably be "knead her" (as the doll didn't shove a knee into her). The rest of the chapter was very nice; Severus scores for originality in his dates!

Author's Response: Question: How did you read this chapter? I don't see that it has been posted yet.

Thanks for the help. I'll try to fix that today.

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