Reviews for Indebted to a Hufflepuff
EllieK |
2004.10.15 - 06:57PM |
19: Frailty, thy name is... |
Anonymous |
I want to rech out and slap him! What an ass!!! What a bloody typical male!!!
Author's Response: I'm indignant too. She's supposed to sit around and thank her lucky stars when he comes around to see her... Well, he'll find that she's made of sterner stuff! |
EllieK |
2004.10.15 - 09:57AM |
9: I Am Inside You Now |
Signed |
Damn!
Author's Response: I hope that was a "Damn that was hot" and not "Damn, the story really took a dive here" ;) |
EllieK |
2004.10.15 - 04:25AM |
6: An Adult Should Know Better |
Signed |
I always did hat that little prick Draco!
Author's Response: Well, she is still stung from his Umbridge sqaud alliance the year before.
Anyway, she has bigger fish to fry! |
EllieK |
2004.10.15 - 04:16AM |
4: Therapy |
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That was classic!
Author's Response: It was hard to figure out how Snape would act after the treatment. I'm glad you approve! |
EllieK |
2004.10.15 - 04:12AM |
3: The Dark Mark Yields to Certain Forces |
Signed |
AAAHHH!!!
This is soooo good!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! It's really contrived, but ... HEY!.... it's just an excuse for lemons ;) |
LariLee |
2004.10.14 - 05:13AM |
25: The Feast |
Anonymous |
Not a review, just a note that I love everything you've written. I sincerely love your Snape. :-D
~Lisa
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That means so much to me! |
June |
2004.10.13 - 07:02PM |
25: The Feast |
Anonymous |
Ch 25 - SHRIEK!!! He goes to all this trouble to get her to opalliom again and then she STOPS it!!! Next time, he should just tell her to "let it happen". Groan.... BTW, thanks for the chapter; after the last chapter (scary porcelain dolls with tiny dagger), this was VERY nice. Umm, did she get to eat any dinner, or just him?
Author's Response: Good point! I guess she managed a few bites in between his. He doesn't know that she's holding back... though I imagine he'll figure it out during some future lemon ;)
Thanks for the review! |
Isobel L |
2004.09.29 - 04:14PM |
24: The Tower of London |
Anonymous |
Wow - that was so imaginative. You created a very seductive scene, heightened by the somewhat sinister porcelain dolls with unknown intentions. Your Snape certainly is master of his game. I love his final comments - it always comes down to the stomach! lol.
Author's Response: Thanks! I worked very hard on those to ty to give them a novel touch. |
June W |
2004.09.25 - 02:05AM |
23: Far Away Lands |
Anonymous |
(2nd try at leaving a review for this chapter) I'm dense... why is it an insult to Mrs Hemmings to tell her to take off the rest of the weekend? Does Mrs Hemmings know she likes Severus? Nice touch, for Severus to Stupefy her before apparating her back home. We wouldn't want him to be too mushy...heh-heh...
Author's Response: She's insulted because she made it sound as if she had pushed to work on the weekend, when in fact it was her own initiative... and she herself had done nothing, since she was waiting for Snape. Mrs. Hemmings has figured it out by now.
Thanks for the reviews!
Author's Response: About Mrs. Hemmings: also she's earned a fair amount of autonomy, and she's bothered that she tried to regulate when she shows up to work or not... it's a kind of "You're love sick, and you're acting like a fool. Don't mess with me." kind of thing. |
June W |
2004.09.25 - 02:02AM |
24: The Tower of London |
Anonymous |
Ch 24 - porcelain dolls with tiny dagger... eeks! Reminds me too much of a scary Twilight Zone episode that still gives me the creepies. The doll "kneed her" should probably be "knead her" (as the doll didn't shove a knee into her). The rest of the chapter was very nice; Severus scores for originality in his dates!
Author's Response: Question: How did you read this chapter? I don't see that it has been posted yet.
Thanks for the help. I'll try to fix that today. |
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