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severus_slave |
2011.10.12 - 02:40PM |
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Hot! Hot! Hot! LOL Wow, those library scenes were so erotic and the harder, faster comment was wonderful! My mouth was open and I was drooling...thinking...MORE MORE MORE!!!
That was truly amazing! Thanks for that. |
Moony63 |
2005.11.29 - 10:07PM |
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WOW! That was great! I really enjoyed it. You kept them in character and made it just totaly believable! I love the descriptions of Snapes voice, I could just hear everything in Alan Rickmans voice. Really awesome. I will now go and seek out your other stories. ;-) Keep up the great work! Thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you. But Alan Rickman's voice? Ha. That was definitely *not* in the author's head. But you may use whatever works for you. ;-) ~Lee |
smoke |
2005.02.26 - 11:13AM |
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Holy Hotflash, Batman!! Excellent! Love the portrayal of their feelings. You might make a slash lover of me yet. I've read the first 2 chapters of "Habit," and I'd like to change my "Poor Lupin," to "Poor Severus," if that's OK?
Author's Response: Now how on *earth* did you find me over here, from my links on Wolfsbane??! Giggle. No matter, glad you did! And I'm glad this story is still resonating with people; it was the first fic I ever wrote, back almost a year ago now, so I know it has problems. "Poor Severus" indeed... Thanks for the review, and stay tuned for another "Habit" update shortly! |
distempered |
2004.12.15 - 11:49PM |
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That was so sad and smutty. *applause*
Author's Response: Thanks! There's just something about Snupin that screams "sad" and "smutty" at the same bloody time, eh? I'm glad you liked it. :-) |
Crossbow |
2004.10.06 - 10:12PM |
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As the other reviewers have said, excellent job keeping them in character. I also liked the speculation on why Snape came back to the Dumbedore's side.
Author's Response: Oooh, do you? That line was kind of a throwaway, but I've since thought that maybe it's worthy of a prequel... as to Snape's, er, personal (cough) reasons for defecting from the DEs... Stay tuned! ;) |
mongoluehring |
2004.10.05 - 10:46PM |
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Anonymous |
Hey, sunshine. Slash is generally not my thing, but this was very nicely done. The best parts for me were the exploration of their feelings and motivations. You write beautifully! :)
Author's Response: Thanks, Donna! *hugs you for reading my slash* Yeah, I can't accept much blatant shagging between these two -- I need motivation. I'm glad you found it believable! |
brodeurbunny30 |
2004.09.21 - 02:20PM |
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wow, i'm really impressed with this.... the flashbacks to the library by both parties were extroadinarily hot... and the way they talked about love, loss, and death with each other was wonderful.. i dearly love your portrayal of snape in this... awesome.
please write more, because there isn't enough snape/lupin fics out there!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I've got a few more SS/RL fics in the works, including a Prequel and Sequel for this one -- stay tuned! |
Strange Fixation |
2004.07.10 - 11:10PM |
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Stunningly in character; Snape is so completely lovable here. The harder, deeper, faster conversation was...too hot to handle. Bravo :)
Author's Response: Thanks, hon. Ooh, yes... am I a naughty girl for even conjuring that conversation, nevermind writing it? ;) It was wickedly fun to pen that scene, believe me... |
rayvyn2k |
2004.06.26 - 11:39AM |
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This is one of a VERY few Snape slash stories I've actually liked. Wonderfully written, in character and also HOT.
Author's Response: Ha. Glad to be the one to bring you on board the battleship Slash!Snape. *grins wickedly* |
ancientgirl |
2004.06.24 - 08:58AM |
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I love Snape/Lupin slash. This was wonderful and you did a great job keeping them in character. I hope you think about doing more because I don't think there is enough written about this pair.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I don't think there's enough good stuff on Lupin/Snape either. I'm trying to fill in the gap... And I'm glad you found them in character. That's the best compliment a writer can get! :) |
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