Reviews for Where the Heart Is
tears |
2005.01.01 - 06:48PM |
17: Don't Betray Your Own |
Signed |
Ithink your story is wonderful i'm just sad that you don'y have many if any reviewsthose people don't know what they are missing |
EllieK |
2004.10.04 - 11:54PM |
2: The Unusual Gift |
Signed |
I realy like this story, but I do not like the way the lines of dialogue run together. (More than one person speaking in a paragraph) |
Carolyn |
2004.07.04 - 08:00PM |
6: Confrontations |
Anonymous |
Wow, this story is really great. I'm surprised that no one has review it yet. I especially like her encounters with Snape, especially the last one, where he brushes her hair. It seems to me that he's a little OOC, but that's alright, it makes the story better. And isn't the Dark Mark supposed to burn extremely painfully when he's summoned? I was surprised at how lightly you made it seem...
But anyways, great story, keep up the good work! |
me |
2004.06.01 - 12:37AM |
21: Where the Heart Is |
Anonymous |
really awesome. i liked the visions angle. sex scenes were nice, too ;^) |
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